Verse 11821aarthaa


G3

1
of every single drop, I was compelled to give an account
2
the blood of the liver was a trust from/for/'of' the eyelashes of the beloved

'A deposit, trust, whatever is committed to another's charge'.

References
Arshi, Imtiyaz Ali Ghazal# 15
Raza, Kalidas Gupta 326-327
Nuskhah-e-Hamidiyah 58-59
Asi, Abdul Bari 63-64
Gyan Chand 92-95
Hamid Ali Khan Open Image

ABOUT the construction: The creatively complex use of the construction is one of Ghalib's favorite devices. Another example occurs in the next verse, 16,2 ; see also 18,5 ; 33,2 (where the range of possibilities is explained more carefully); 38,5 , 39,3 , 49,10 , and many others, such as those listed above. The form is used equationally in 173,8 . Just for interest, consider also 56,2 , in which the poet uses four forms in a row and is criticized for it by the commentators. (In 77,2 he uses five forms in one line, but they aren't all in a row, so nobody complains.) And then there's 71,3 , in which two (optional) forms are exploited to the fullest, to make one of the most radically multivalent verses in the world. On the conspicuous ambiguity of, for example, as both 'the beloved's thought' and 'the thought of the beloved', see 41,6 . For a grammatical analysis of the , see C. M. Naim's account . The divan version of this ghazal has no opening-verse ; in the form in which it was originally composed, 16,6x was its opening-verse, and 16,7x was a second opening-verse. Is the or trust one given by the beloved's eyelashes, or one destined for the beloved's eyelashes, or one that's associated with the beloved's eyelashes through identity, possession, or in some other (unspecified) way? Usually such choices aren't even mutually exclusive. After all, we know from 10,2 what destiny the beloved's eyelashes have in mind for the lover's drops of blood. And we know from 26,7 that it's sometimes hard to tell who owes what to whom. But like a reliable trustee, the lover must account for every tiny bit of the estate that he is charged with administering. Every drop of the blood of the liver must be monitored and reported on individually, for we know the possessive beloved will insist on a detailed reckoning; for another such depiction see 113,3 . graphics/blooddrops.jpg