Verse 31816anme;N


G2

1
I am the trust-room of the cruelty of the movements of the eyelashes
2
every drop of my blood in the body is a 'signet-ring'/jewel with the name of the {beautiful one / witness}

'A precious stone; --a precious stone set in a ring; --a ring, (esp.) a signet-ring; --what fits or sits well'.

References
Arshi, Imtiyaz Ali Ghazal# 91
Raza, Kalidas Gupta 209-210
Nuskhah-e-Hamidiyah 158-159
Asi, Abdul Bari 166
Gyan Chand 268-269
Hamid Ali Khan Open Image

On seals and signet-rings, see 61,5 . This verse offers an enjoyably clever deployment of the legal imagery of trust, safeguarding, labelling, witnessing. The speaker himself is the bank vault in which the cruelty of the movements of the beloved's eyelashes is preserved. How? Because the cruelly irresistible movements of her eyelashes have worked like engraving tools, engraving her name into every single drop of his blood the way one would carve letters on a precious stone, a signet ring, or a personal seal. And further to assure the speaker's reliability, the beloved is identified as a , which is also a legal term for a 'witness'; for more on this term, see 98,6 . Since the lover holds in trust countless blood-drops that are indelibly marked as belonging to someone else, his behavior is controlled by that legal obligation: his life is emphatically not his own. The piercing power of the eyelashes is a ghazal commonplace. The beloved's eyelashes sometimes pierce the blood-drops completely through, to make a set of coral prayer-beads, as in 10,2 ; this is an aspect of their identification as tiny spears or arrows. They can also pierce liver-fragments and thus 'dine' on them (as on kabobs?) with relish, as in 233,2 . Bekhud Mohani and Arshi are right to point to 16,1 for comparison, since it works with the same basic imagery: each drop of blood as individually, accountably, held in trust for the beloved's eyelashes. Yet the present verse goes beyond it, and performs an elegant twist of its own: here, the delicate up-and-down movements of the fluttering eyelashes don't pierce, but engrave. A whole new domain of metaphor is thus opened up for exploration. graphics/redstone.jpg