Verse 11after 1821aamauj-e sharaab
G5
In this meter the first long syllable may be replaced by a short; and the next-to-last long syllable may be replaced by two shorts.
1
it's a commentary on the commotion of existence-- bravo to the rose-season!
2
it's a guide for the drop, to the sea-- hooray for the wave of wine!
'A convention, an assembly, a meeting; a crowd; --noise, tumult, commotion, confusion, uproar; sedition, disturbance, disorder; an affray; assault'.
| References | |
|---|---|
| Arshi, Imtiyaz Ali | Ghazal# 49 |
| Raza, Kalidas Gupta | 356 |
| Hamid Ali Khan | Open Image |
That is, the flourishing of the rose and the sea is saying, look how the turmoil of existence has heated up! And similarly, creatures engage in praise and celebration. And the wave of wine, having fertilized the world of existence, now shows the drop the way to the sea. (46)
== Nazm page 46
He says, the ardor of the rose-season is telling us, 'Enthusiasm of the turmoil of existence is established in the world thanks to me alone-- as if I am a commentary on the turmoil of existence'. And in the same way the wave of wine is claiming, 'To take the drop to the sea, I have the power of a guide []'. That is, the way the drop goes and finds oblivion in the sea, in the same way the intoxication of wine conveys the soul into the world of self-lessness, to its destined place. (89)
In both lines he has created comparability and a fine display of parallelism []. (124)
In this verse the verbal device of 'juxtaposition' [] is found, and the trimness of construction is worthy of praise. (401)
This is another of Ghalib's many drop-and-ocean verses. Structurally, its feature is parallelism , as Josh points out; for more on this see 4,5 .
As usual in the verses that rely on parallelism of structure, the question of how to juxtapose the lines is especially acute. Do the two lines offer (a) two statements of the same basic situation? Or (b) statements of two similar situations? Or (c) statements of two contrasting situations?
If the two lines offer two statements of the same basic situation, as in (a), then spring and wine are interpreters of the same tumultuous experience of life in the world, and we, along with the drop, are grateful for their help in leading us through and beyond that tumult to the great sea in which we can find the peace and fulfillment of oblivion, or .
If the two lines offer statements of two similar situations, as in (b), then we see the lines as truly parallel. The rose-season is a commentary on the tumult of existence, because although roses are captivatingly beautiful, their lives are painfully short. Through them we come to understand that we need to look beyond this transient world. Similarly, and very appropriately, the flow of the wave of wine is what guides the drop to the sea. The wine starts as new green grapes in the verdure of spring; the grapes are later ripped from their stems, trampled and crushed, fermented into wine, passed rapidly around in glasses and waved in the air, before attaining oblivion-- even as they offer intoxication (and oblivion?) to the drinkers. Just as the life-cycle of the rose guides us, so the life-cycle of the 'wave of wine' guides the (literal? metaphorical?) drop to the sea.
If the two lines offer statements of two contrasting situations, as in (c), then we could say that while both the rose-season and the wave of wine deserve praise and gratitude, the wave of wine deserves more. The rose-season offers merely a commentary, while the wave of wine offers guidance all the way, and brings the journey to the only possible kind of 'successful', self-obliterating conclusion.
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