Verse 21821aakare ko))ii
G3
1
the world is the dust of the desert/wildness/madness of Majnun , entirely/'head to head'
2
how long would anyone give thought to the curl-crest of Laila ?!
'A desert, solitude, dreary place; --loneliness, solitariness, dreariness; --sadness, grief, care; --wildness, fierceness, ferocity, savageness; barbarity, barbarism; --timidity, fear, fright, dread, terror, horror; --distraction, madness'.
turrah>> : 'Hair, or a fringe of hair, on the forehead; a forelock; a curl, ringlet; an ornament worn in the turban; an ornamental tassel, or border, &c.; a plume of feathers, a crest; a nosegay; (met.) the best, or the cream (of a thing)'.
| References | |
|---|---|
| Arshi, Imtiyaz Ali | Ghazal# 169 |
| Raza, Kalidas Gupta | 347 |
| Nuskhah-e-Hamidiyah | 255-257 |
| Asi, Abdul Bari | 262-263 |
| Gyan Chand | 383-384 |
| Hamid Ali Khan | Open Image |
That is, the world is the appearance of a mirage; how long would we consider it to be the wave of a sea? (242)
== Nazm page 242
He says, the existence of the world is the appearance of a mirage-- how long will we be deceived and consider it to be the wave of a sea? (300)
The world has become, from end to end, the dust of the madness of Majnun. In such a situation, not to pay attention to it and to think about the curls of Laila is a good thing. (434)
The structure of the second line, especially through its clever, witty use of and , opens up several bizarre and enjoyable possibilities. The fact that Laila's 'curl-crest' can be either a sort of top-knot or crest-jewel, or else her curls themselves (see the definition above), offers a wide range of imagery. The presence of enables the line to be read either as referring either to Majnun himself in a sort of generalized awe-struck way ('How can anyone do such things?'), or to anybody at all. Nor do we know the relationship between the two lines, since this is an 'A,B' verse: we can't tell whether the world's state is simply an observed fact (flatly reported in the first line), or is to be ascribed to Majnun's meditation on the curl-crest of Laila.
In particular, the has almost the same range as the 'kya effect'. Here are some of the complex rhetorical possibilities that result:
=The inquiring question: An observer notices that Majnun's obsession has already turned the world into a dust-storm, and inquires: 'What's going on here? How strange! How does he do it? How much longer will he continue with it? If his madness continues, what will he do to the world next?'
=The rhetorical question: How long would/could Majnun, or anybody else, go on doing such a thing?! Because:
==it's amazing that he's been able to keep it up so long, and that he's achieved such powerful effects!
==he ought to stop at once-- by thinking of Laila's curls to the point of madness, Majnun has already reduced the whole world to a desert or wilderness!
==he ought to stop at once-- by thinking of Laila's long, dark, tangled curls, Majnun has covered the world with a dark, swirling dust-storm!
=The negative rhetorical question (with a petulant effect): how long can Majnun, or anybody else, be expected to go on doing such a thing? Naturally, he would stop! The implication is that Laila's curl-crest might not be thought of (or taken care of, or protected) much longer, either by Majnun or by anybody else. Here are some possible reasons:
==the world is wildness; Laila's curl-crest is delicate and vulnerable.
==the world is madness; meditation on Laila's curl-crest requires focused, sane thought.
==the world is dust from end to end; Laila's distinctive curl-crest would be invisible.
==the world is itself an illusion of Majnun's; Laila's curl-crest thus has an even more contingent existence.
As Faruqi observes, the wordplay of , literally 'head to head', is also a treat. And at the heart of the whole verse is a brilliant evocation of the word , with its multiple senses-- 'desert', 'wildness', 'madness', etc.-- every one of which is richly appropriate.
Compare the rhetorical structure of this verse to that of 214,6 and 214,9 .
Compare also Mir 's meditation on lovers and the cosmic dust they kick up: M 1419,1 .
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