Verse 9after 1826oshhai


G3

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either at night, we used to see that every corner of the 'spread'
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is the skirt of a gardener and the fist of a flower-seller

t>> : 'Anything that is spread out; surface, expanse, expansion; carpet; bedding; chess-cloth or chess-board, dice-board; --goods, wares, &c.'

References
Arshi, Imtiyaz Ali Ghazal# 199
Raza, Kalidas Gupta 373-74
Hamid Ali Khan Open Image

../apparatus/txt_sets.html This is the fourth verse of a seven-verse verse-set ; for discussion of the whole verse-set see 169,6 (and for discussion of the 'spread' as well). The introductory that seems so peculiar is meant to correlate with its partner at the beginning of 169,11 . The two make a contrastive set [] not exactly of mutually exclusive alternatives, but of two highly contrasted moments in time: if we look at night, it's this; if we look at dawn, it's that. (As an example, Asi uses the construction unselfconsciously in his discussion of 40,5x .) The makes the looking a past habitual action, presumably by the speaker himself (using ). The gardener gathers up the hem of his garment in his hand, to make a sort of hammock in which to carry a great mass of freshly picked flowers, in a huge piled-up heap. By contrast, the flower-seller offers quality rather than quantity: a mere handful or small bouquet of the most exquisite blooms, carefully chosen and arranged to appeal to the connoisseur. Thus what the line is 'really' saying, in the heresy of paraphrase, is that the gathering is as full as possible of the radiance and perfume of gloriously fresh flowers. (As we in the ghazal world are always aware, the beloved herself is the ultimate 'rose'.) But of course, the flowers are never mentioned-- which has several advantages. First, it makes the reader work a bit, which creates a buzz in the brain that is enjoyable in itself. And second, it has the advantage of smuggling in people (the gardener, the flower-seller) who are lowly servants-- if even they are (implicitly, metaphorically) there, how crowded and lively the gathering must be! Ghalib has thus effortlessly peopled his 'spread' and given it the requisite 'brilliance' [] that a fine party must have. (Compare the possible presence of the pearl-seller in 169,4 .) In our tour of the senses, we've had eyes and ears, the taste of wine for the tongue, and now, with all those gorgeous flowers, we add some delights for the sense of smell. graphics/flowers.jpg