Verse 4after 1847iirbhii thaa
G5
In this meter the first long syllable may be replaced by a short; and the next-to-last long syllable may be replaced by two shorts.
1
in shackles/bondage, your wild one has that same memory of curls
2
indeed/yes, there was even/also some small trouble/pain/vexation of the heaviness of the chains
'A shackle, fetter, bonds; bondage; confinement, imprisonment; control; restraint; restriction'.
'Wild, untamed; shy; unsociable; --uncultivated; uncivilized, barbarous; savage; untractable; fierce, ferocious; brutish; cruel; --s.m. A wild beast; a brute; a savage'.
'Somewhat, some little, a little'.
'Trouble; sorrow, grief, affliction; sadness; anguish of mind, distress; suffering, pain, hardship; pains, toil, inconvenience; offence, annoyance, vexation, molestation; anger; disgust'.
| References | |
|---|---|
| Arshi, Imtiyaz Ali | Ghazal# 41 |
| Raza, Kalidas Gupta | 397 |
| Hamid Ali Khan | Open Image |
In comparison to the memory of the curls, he has mentioned the imprisonment in chains as very light, so that the memory of the curls can be shown to weigh more heavily. (36)
== Nazm page 36
He says, your madman has still not forgotten your curls, by which he had previously been imprisoned. Although along with it, he also had a light thought of the heaviness of the chains also. Through this mention, he wanted to show that the imprisonment in chains is less in harshness than the imprisonment of the curls. (70)
One ought to consider it as if someone is narrating some event, and after saying something he falls silent. Then spontaneously, or when someone asks him, he reflects and says, oh yes, there was one more matter. In this verse 'yes' and 'also' create an image of pausing in mid-sentence and reflecting before giving a reply. (86)
The affinity of prison, madman, curls, and chains needs no commentary. (140)
Of course the curly tresses [] and the round iron chains or shackles in which a prisoner is confined have their shape in common, and their binding power. The lover may even describe himself as a 'hereditary slave of curls', so that he wouldn't flee from chains (see 19,6 ). As Bekhud Mohani points out, the structure of the second line, starting with the idiomatically concessive ('indeed,' 'oh yes', 'to be sure'), conveys the clear impression of a minor afterthought. The main point having been made, the speaker adds a small supplementary or concessive point he had previously overlooked. As the commentators observe, the effect of this structure is to emphasize both the importance of the curls, and the 'light' weight and trouble [] of the 'heavy' chains by comparison.
Compare Mir 's association of chains with a 'twisting' spring breeze: M 451,1 .
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