Verse 101816aahai


G13

1
for even/also the longing/grief of uncommitted sins, let justice be received
2
oh Lord , if there is punishment for these committed sins!

'Grief, regret, intense grief or sorrow; --longing, desire'.
'Statute, law; equity; justice; crying out for justice, complaint; revenge'.

References
Arshi, Imtiyaz Ali Ghazal# 179
Raza, Kalidas Gupta 268-69
Nuskhah-e-Hamidiyah 275-276
Gyan Chand 395
Hamid Ali Khan Open Image

This is a verse that the commentators generally adore. Not only is it extremely easy to paraphrase-- it almost doesn't need paraphrasing at all. The verse is virtually its own (prosy) paraphrase. But it does offer one complexity: the idea of a 'of' uncommitted sins. Of course, this could well refer, as the commentators maintain, to the speaker's sadness at not being able to commit more sins-- either more in a general way (a larger number of the same kind), or more in a specific way (some particular sins, or particular kinds of sins). But couldn't there also be a more generalized burden or grief or regret occasioned just by the oppressive limitations of the human condition (so many sins, so little time!)? Arshi is right that 79,2 is the perfect verse to compare it to. In both cases, I just can't share the commentators', and Faruqi's, enthusiasm. Like {79,2}, this verse seems excessively, even smugly, tidy and well-constructed. Perhaps this recoil on my part is just a quirk of my own temperament. And here's a verse of Mir's that I don't much care about, for the same reasons: M 544,6 . For another case study, compare the relatively tight, trim explicitness of this verse with the edgy, bleak, thrilling and chilling delights of 230,11 . Tahira Naqvi, in our Urdu poetry group (Sept. 2023), came up with a strikingly reversed interpretation. Her reading is that the sinner or lover has directly challenged God, in a spirit of sheer (mischievous?) defiance: 'Well, if you're going to punish me for the sins I've committed, you can also punish me for the ones that I wanted to commit!'. graphics/judgmentday.jpg