Verse 8after 1847arnahii;N aatii


G8

In this meter the first long syllable may be replaced by a short; and the next-to-last long syllable may be replaced by two shorts.


1
we are there, from where even/also to us
2
no information about us comes

References
Arshi, Imtiyaz Ali Ghazal# 214
Raza, Kalidas Gupta 400-01
Hamid Ali Khan Open Image

Such a simple, stark little verse; it's very effective-- and as so often, it's capable of being read in a number of moods and intonations. But its terse, telegraphic quality is perfect for a sort of truncated explanation of the lover's failure to communicate. This one finds its real nature if read as a postcard from the void. graphics/emptiness.jpg