Verse 31852aako))ii din aur
G13
1
you've come yesterday and only/emphatically today you say, 'I would go'?!
2
granted that [it will] not [be] forever-- all right, a few days more!
| References | |
|---|---|
| Arshi, Imtiyaz Ali | Ghazal# 66 |
| Raza, Kalidas Gupta | 425 |
| Hamid Ali Khan | Open Image |
Out of an excess of grief, he has imagined this scene-- as if Arif is still alive, and is about to take his leave. (65)
== Nazm page 65
He says, 'How much time has even passed since you came into the world? It's as if you came only yesterday, and today you're saying that you're going. I agree that you won't stay forever, but stay a few days more. Why are you in such a hurry to die?' (114)
At the time of Arif's death, or in the turmoil of grief, he has versified the thought that Arif has come, and is taking his leave. Then he says, 'You only came yesterday, and today you leave? Come now, brother-- all right, not forever, stay a few days more.' (147)
For general comments on this most unusual ghazal, see 66,1 .
Any guest who has ever tried to leave the home of a traditional South Asian host knows how difficult it can be. For the host to try hard to detain the guest is very proper, and does credit to both parties. The tone of this verse is entirely colloquial, and thus impossible to capture in English. It's part of that last hospitable conversation as the guest is politely but firmly heading for the door. The 'all right' [] in the second line represents a show of concession on the host's part. The host has reluctantly granted that the guest will not stay forever-- and on the strength of that concession he both demands 'a few days more', and tries to force the guest to agree by implying that he already has agreed ('all right'), and that 'a few days more' is a compromise they have both accepted.
This host-and-guest conversation between Ghalib and Arif continues in the next verse, 66,4} .
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