Verse 81853arhai kyaa kahiye


G9

In this meter the next-to-last long syllable may be replaced by two shorts.


1
envy/jealousy is the punishment for accomplishment in speech/poetry-- what can be done?
2
tyranny is the price of the wealth of skill/craft-- 'what can you say?!'

'Envy, malice; — emulation, ambition'.
is an archaic form of ( GRAMMAR )
'Price, value;... -- , s.m. Blood-money'.

References
Arshi, Imtiyaz Ali Ghazal# 227
Raza, Kalidas Gupta 440-41
Hamid Ali Khan Open Image

Nazm rightly emphasizes both the parallelism, and the enjoyably exclamatory use of idioms, that give this verse its oomph. As Bekhud Dihlavi notes, the verse seems to follow naturally from its predecessor, 201,7 ; he also singles out these two verses as, collectively, the high point of the ghazal . And of course the idioms are not just generally appropriate in mood-- able to express ruefulness, vexation, frustration, a shrug of the shoulders, wry amusement, or whatever other tone you want to read them in-- but are also specifically appropriate to the semantic content of each line. The first line decrees an action, a 'punishment', and its idiomatic ending resigns itself in terms of another action, expressed in an archaic form of the passive-- 'what can be done?'. The second line seems to evoke a mercantile transaction: there is a 'price' for a kind of 'wealth' or 'property', so that 'what can you say?' is appropriate to a situation of bargaining or negotiation. And of course the 'wealth' is that of poetry, literally 'speech', itself, so 'what can you say?' acquires a whole extra dimension of relevance. Bekhud Mohani insists that the verse is a complaint against the way the world in general treats poets 'nowadays'; needless to say, there's no such indication of temporality in the verse itself. Moreover, 'envy/jealousy' is often felt by rival lovers, not just by rival poets; and 'tyranny' is particularly appropriate to the beloved's behavior. So the verse might also ruefully refer to the way the lover's reward for his poetic skill is jealousy from his rivals, along with cruelty (which can often be a sign of favor, acceptance, and attention) from the beloved herself. graphics/handwriting1.jpg