Verse 11816aa))iihai
G5
In this meter the first long syllable may be replaced by a short; and the next-to-last long syllable may be replaced by two shorts.
1
greenery is sprouting from door and walls, Ghalib
2
we are in the desert, and {at home / in the house} springtime has come!
| References | |
|---|---|
| Arshi, Imtiyaz Ali | Ghazal# 204 |
| Raza, Kalidas Gupta | 257-58 |
| Nuskhah-e-Hamidiyah | 242-243 |
| Asi, Abdul Bari | 300-301 |
| Gyan Chand | 442-443 |
| Hamid Ali Khan | Open Image |
In madness, desolation and wilderness are pleasing. When the house was not desolate, then he left it and came away into the desert. But so much time has passed in desert-wandering that the house has become desolate-- to such an extent that grass has grown up on the door and walls. Now the heart desires to see this garden-house. In this verse there's no excellence of expression or rhetoric [], but in very clear plain words he has captured such a picture of madness that it has no peer. (167-68)
== Nazm page 167 ; Nazm page 168
He says, thanks to wildness of heart, we have become, in a state of madness, a desert-wanderer. And the rainy season has come and, in the state of desolation, brought forth grasson door and walls. Alas, that we wander in the wilderness, and in the house spring has come and the desolate house has become a garden. Mirza Sahib has created such a picture of madness, in such simple words, that it's beyond praise. (224)
In this verse is a peerless picture of madness. If he were not mad, then his heart would writhe at this devastation of the house and the door and walls becoming a heap of dust and grass covering the whole house. Now he considers that situation to be the ebullience of spring. And he's restless to go and reach there. (301)
The original closing-verse of this ghazal was 156,3x , which used 'Asad' rather than 'Ghalib'.
The first line, in classic mushairah performance style, suggests a melancholy reflection that seems likely to be followed in the second line by something about time, death, the lover's fate, or the human condition. But instead, after the obligatory suspense-creating delay, the second line offers an amusing sense of ruefulness: what a waste, that here the speaker is, miles from home, and only now, in his absence, is his house verdant and flourishing! Here, the lover thinks, is a fine irony. But of course, to the audience a much greater irony is also apparent: that the lover's notion of 'springtime' and 'verdancy' consists of the house becoming such a wreck that it's overgrown with weeds and returning to a wilderness state --joining its owner, in a sense.
For other home-versus-desert verses, see 17,2 . An amusing one is 10,7 , in which the grass growing in the house is sufficient to provide a living for the Doorkeeper. A more complex one is 35,8 , a brilliant verse that proposes a whole range of possible relationships between home and desert.
But I'd also like to add some verses that suggest a different line of interpretation. In 18,3 the desert seems to be invoked as Majnun 's 'home': he's a 'desert-wanderer', he's to be found by wilderness-roaming, and his house is 'doorless'. (Think also of 127,2 , which proposes the making of a 'without-door-and-walls-ish' house.) But the clearest proof is 140,6 , in which beyond all doubt the wilderness is Majnun's 'house' []. So it's possible to read the lover here as similarly mad, a similar desert-wanderer who considers the wilderness his 'house'. It's springtime, the desert grasses and plants have sprung up for their brief season in the sun. The mad lover considers that his wilderness 'house' is now flourishing, with its 'door and walls' decked out in greenery. Even in the 'waterless' [] desert [], he's able to envision himself as having a lively, seasonally decorated house. Who could ask for more? It's a secondary reading no doubt, but ... (cf. 162,11 ).
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