Verse 9x1821uudthaa
G3
1
[either] the world is an enchantment of a cemetery/'city of the silent' entirely/'head to head'
2
or I was an alien/stranger to/in the land of speaking and hearing
''The city of the silent'; a cemetery'.
'Foreign, alien; strange, wonderful; rare, unusual, extraordinary; --poor, destitute; meek, mild, humble, lowly; --a stranger, foreigner, an alien; --a poor man; a meek or humble person'.
| References | |
|---|---|
| Arshi, Imtiyaz Ali | Ghazal# 4 |
| Raza, Kalidas Gupta | 318 |
| Nuskhah-e-Hamidiyah | 29 |
| Asi, Abdul Bari | 51-52 |
| Gyan Chand | 65-67 |
| Hamid Ali Khan | Open Image |
= a cemetery. For me, this world is entirely an enchantment. Either nothing told me of its reality, or else I was a stranger in this world. The gist is that I wasn't able to understand the language of this place.
== Gyan Chand, p. 65
For background see S. R. Faruqi's choices . For more on Ghalib's unpublished verses, see the discussion in 4,8x .
Gyan Chand's text has not but , which seems a far less probable reading than Raza's, since it sacrifices the excellent wordplay and gains nothing in return; as always, I follow Raza. In this particular case Gyan Chand's text might have been carelessly conflated with his text of 3,8x .
An enchantment [] is a magic world, a narrative concept developed to the highest possible degree in the Dastan of Amir Hamzah . An enchanted world in which no one could speak or hear, or at least no one did speak or hear, would be a fine realm for a hero to explore. But the speaker feels that either he's trapped in a cemetery, or else he's an 'alien' or 'destitute'-- no matter what the explanation, he's not a gallant hero but someone who's hopelessly isolated and alone. Either people in this enchanted realm neither speak nor hear (since they're literally or metaphorically dead), or else he himself is a kind of deaf-mute and cannot even hear their conversation, much less share in it; thus he himself is socially 'dead'.
Needless to say, without the wordplay of 'city of the silent' for 'cemetery', this verse wouldn't have a leg to stand on. While we're mentioning body parts, 'head to head' is a great touch, in a verse based on speech and hearing.
Compare Mir's more spectacularly radical use of the idea of a : M 1314,9 .
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