Verse 61838anke paa;Nv


G3

1
the tumult/excitement of roses is in flourishingness/glory/spring, to {this extent / 'here'}-- that on every side
2
while flying, they become entangled-- the feet of the garden-bird

'Boiling, ebullition; effervescence; heat, excitement, passion, emotion; lust; fervour, ardour, zeal'.
'Spring, prime, bloom, flourishing state; beauty, glory, splendour, elegance; beautiful scene or prospect, fine landscape; charm, delight, enjoyment, the pleasures of sense, taste, or culture'.
'To be entangled, ravelled, twisted, entwined; to be complicated, made intricate; to be perplexed; to be involved (in difficulties, &c.), to be at a loss... to have the heart set or fixed (on).... to have a liaison (with), form an illicit connection (with).... to carp or cavil (at)'.

References
Arshi, Imtiyaz Ali Ghazal# 122
Raza, Kalidas Gupta 386-87
Hamid Ali Khan Open Image

The special pleasure of this verse is in the multivalence of (see the definition above). Consider some of the possibilities: =As the birds fly past, their feet literally become entangled-- in roses, we think, though literally in the 'ardor' or 'ebullience' of roses. =As the birds fly past, their feet have some sort of romantic fixation or sexual contact, some liaison, with the erotically lush and steamy roses. =As the birds fly past, their feet quarrel with, or complain against, the proliferating roses that obstruct their path =The birds who live in or visit the garden are unable to take off to leave the garden, since their flight is hindered by the enmeshing rose-vines. =The birds who fly over the garden are captivated by its lush glory, and lose all desire to move on; metaphorically, their 'feet are entangled' in the greenery. The verse is takes advantage of the richness of (effervescence, or lust), and (flourishingness, or springtime) and ('up to here', literally; 'to such an extent', metaphorically) and ('in every direction', literally; 'everywhere', metaphorically). The mind can't finally settle on either a literal, physical reading (birds' feet entangled in rose tendrils) or a metaphorical reading (birds captivated with passion for the wild glory of the roses). graphics/gardenbird.jpg