For background see S. R. Faruqi's choices . For more on Ghalib's unpublished verses, see the discussion in 4,8x . The arresting first line means that the verse works better than the previous one, 223,4x . But both verses have second lines that begin with the same word, and of course both use the same rhyme -word (as does 223,3x as well). We can see the young Ghalib's experimental energies in action. The general effect of the second line is apparently to say that the lovers' passion is so extreme that it has manifested itself in the destruction not merely of themselves, but of their dwelling places as well. But like the second line in {223,4x}, it's annoyingly broad in its range of possibilities. Has passion 'given' the outward wound/scar, or has this mark 'been given' (see the definition above) to passion by the lovers? And is this good or bad, is it deliberate, or inadvertent, or unavoidable? And is the 'ebullience' located in the lovers, or in passion, or in the 'desolateness' itself? It's remarkable how Ghalib's brilliant ambiguities can become so overdone that they don't quite catch hold of our imagination. I don't find this one as irritating as {223,4x}, but it's still kind of maddening to feel in the first line some glimmer of what might have become a brilliant verse-- but then doesn't manage to do so. The second line needs to be punchier, pithier, less terminally abstract. graphics/blacktent.jpg